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寫開發信讓完全都沒接觸過這塊的我好緊張阿

可否幫我修改或哪裡需要改進的嗎 謝謝^^


Dear Sirs / Madams,

公司名 is a manufacturer of hydraulic cylinders. We have built up for 30

years and also the greatest supplier in Taiwan. We believe you will be

satisfied with our professional quality if you are searching for a reliable

supplier.


Our products can be applied to many different types of industry such as

agriculture machines, marine industries, trucking, auto hauling equipment,

heavy duty cranes, hydraulic/pneumatic automatic series etc.


If you want to know more information about our product, please visit our

website at htty://


Thanks for your valuable time to read this letter. We are looking forward to

establish a long-term& mutual beneficial partnership with you in early future.


Your reply will be greatly appreciated

Sincerely yours

Hennie



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