可以幫我看開發信內容嗎 - 國貿工作討論

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最近小妹我才剛應徵上國貿助理

寫開發信讓完全都沒接觸過這塊的我好緊張阿

可否幫我修改或哪裡需要改進的嗎 謝謝^^


Dear Sirs / Madams,

公司名 is a manufacturer of hydraulic cylinders. We have built up for 30

years and also the greatest supplier in Taiwan. We believe you will be

satisfied with our professional quality if you are searching for a reliable

supplier.


Our products can be applied to many different types of industry such as

agriculture machines, marine industries, trucking, auto hauling equipment,

heavy duty cranes, hydraulic/pneumatic automatic series etc.


If you want to know more information about our product, please visit our

website at htty://


Thanks for your valuable time to read this letter. We are looking forward to

establish a long-term& mutual beneficial partnership with you in early future.


Your reply will be greatly appreciated

Sincerely yours

Hennie



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All Comments

Jake avatarJake2011-10-08
forward to establishing~我們家內容差不多~但我寄EDM
Ingrid avatarIngrid2011-10-11
EDM是甚麼?
Rachel avatarRachel2011-10-14
EDM好複雜噢XD
William avatarWilliam2011-10-17
我想國外客戶看到一堆文字應該會當垃圾信~EDM圖片參考囉
Enid avatarEnid2011-10-21
EDM-->應該是指e-mail DM
Madame avatarMadame2011-10-24
http:// 你打成 htty://
Daniel avatarDaniel2011-10-27
好謝謝^^