麻煩各位幫我看下cover letter - 海外工作

不好意思喔..希望沒有違反板規

因為小妹我沒留過學，又第一次要找國外(東南亞)的工作

寫了一個非常簡單的COVER LETTER..算是人生中的第一次

不知道有沒有文法錯誤、用詞不夠正式或哪裡不妥的地方？

麻煩大家幫我看下了

我主要是找網頁程式設計師的工作，會從人力網站上寄出

另外也想請問一下如果不知道收件人的職稱的話，寫Personnel Manager OK嗎？

先在此感謝大家了！


Dear Ms. XXX：


I am writing in reply to your advert for the above post, which was advertised

on website, and I enclose my CV and Resume in application.


Constructing website is my interest, and hope everyone can enjoy on it. This

is a perfect job which can bring enthusiasm and satisfaction to me. Now I am

finding a overseas job which can broaden my horizons and improve my English.

My related experience as follows.


- Knowledge of PHP OOP Programming、MySQL and MVC.

- Familiar with the use of certain WEB raleted applications using

technologies such as　HTML, CSS, Javascript, jQuery, UML etc.

- Familiar with NetBeans, Enterprise Architect, SVN, XAMPP etc.

- Welcome new challenges and learning new skills.


As you can see from my enclosed resume both of Chinese and English for your

reference. Thank you for your time and consideration, I am looking forward to

hearing from you soon.



Yours faithfully,
XXX


看書上寫說美式的寫法，每段落都不用空行，如果有錯的話也麻煩再告訴我了，謝謝!


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