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各位大大 小弟的主管要求我寫一封邀請信 為了3月的展覽

我寫的如下 被主管說太混 希望各位大大能夠給我一點意見

Dear sirs,

Good day to you! My name is Travis from XXX Machine company.
The main products of our company are : XXX

On March, we have attended an exhibition and it's my pleasure to invite you
for a visit.

The detail of the exhibition is shown as below:

Timtos IN 2009
Date: Mar.2 ~ Mar.7, 2009
Booth No.:
Exhibits: XXX

We will greatly appreciate if you could inform us your visit to our exhibition in advance

We look forward to seeing you in the exhibition

Regards,

煩請各位大大幫忙修正一下

謝謝

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All Comments

Charlie avatarCharlie2009-01-06
跟你們老闆說直接做的logo 標明TIMTOS攤位號碼 及日期
Gary avatarGary2009-01-08
寄信時當作簽名檔一起出去 每封信都會有這樣效益會更大
Vanessa avatarVanessa2009-01-09
a大是哪間? TIMTOS會見面的....
Caroline avatarCaroline2009-01-10
不同意你主管的話。信愈長人家愈不想看...