對呀，不用搞得太長，把主要的攤位號碼…
甚至你是誰都不用自介，直接說This is XXX company...
寫一些簡單重點的公司自介…
然後把攤位寫明，這比較重要
你們也參加TIMTOS哦…是那個攤位的呀…我們也有參加咧…到時見囉...
你們在那一館呀?
※ 引述《afish1238 (afish)》之銘言：
: 各位大大 小弟的主管要求我寫一封邀請信 為了3月的展覽
: 我寫的如下 被主管說太混 希望各位大大能夠給我一點意見
: Dear sirs,
: Good day to you! My name is Travis from XXX Machine company.
: The main products of our company are : XXX
: On March, we have attended an exhibition and it's my pleasure to invite you
: for a visit.
: The detail of the exhibition is shown as below:
: Timtos IN 2009
: Date: Mar.2 ~ Mar.7, 2009
: Booth No.:
: Exhibits: XXX
: We will greatly appreciate if you could inform us your visit to our exhibition in advance
: We look forward to seeing you in the exhibition
: Regards,
: 煩請各位大大幫忙修正一下
: 謝謝
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