開發信內容幾乎都大同小異嗎？ - 國貿工作討論

※ 引述《gogop (ker)》之銘言：
: 我收到的開發信給大家參考~~請問大家的字數大約多少呢？
: Dear Sir,
: This is Michael from China, I am glad to know you from internet.
: We are a company which markets electronic parts and components produced by
: many world-famous manufacturers.
: Our products focus on SMD capacitor manufactured by ○○○○○; Tantalum
: capacitor manufactured by ○○○!"
: ○○○○○○○ diode and transistor by ○○○; SMD inductor by ○○○○
: electrolytic capacitor by ○○○○ and all kinds of resister and card
: connecter are available.
: We can provide the high quality products with competitive price. Hope it will
: be help for you.
: Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
: Yours Faithfully
: Michael
: ○○○○○○ Technology Co., Ltd
: Skype: ○○○○
: MSN: ○○○○
: ------------------------------------------------------------------
: Dear Sir/Madam:
: Nice Day~
: Our company have some Original stock new phone On Sale , Such as Moto
: V180 at 9.9USD, Blackberry 6230 at 9.9USD. Nokia 8250 at 9.9USD with
: accessories... If you want to know more , please contact me freely. I am glad
: to answer your question :)
: Thanks in advance~
: Best Regards
: Fancy
: -------------------------------------------------------------------
: Dear Manager,
: How are you,This is Cairne Lu, I would like to take this opportunity to
: introduce China ○○○○ Co,.Ltd. and establish a mutually beneficial
: relationship with your company.
: China ○○○○ Co,.Ltd. will give you "really chinese price with high
: quality" for injection mold making. If you have any molds and plastic
: products metal parts need to make from China, please feel free to contact us.
: We will provide you high quality molds and products with better price. Our
: service and advantages at China ○○○○.
: Contact http://www. now to learn how you can increase your company's profits
: by using our services.
: Your quickly reply of RFQ will be highly appreciated, I believe we can offer
: you the most competitive price. thanks a lot!
: Thanks & Best regards
: Cairne Lu
: ○○○○○ Co., Ltd.
: Tel :
: Fax :
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我分享一下我的寫法

標題:直接用Quotation-某產品 這個產品對方本來就有在產銷或者在用

Dear Sir,

Hello, We could provide the following products.

列出產品清單,對方有興趣就回信啦
報價單 我是不會第一次就發的
但是確保對方一定會回信
第二次發送的時候才會附上intro跟產品明細跟報價單

第二段我才會寫我們是某某公司,設立於某某年,專長是做甚麼

B regards,

附上連絡人資訊 公司網站等等
copy/paste繼續用就可以了

這是我的作法啦,我也還只是國貿小業務 也希望各位先輩指點一下:)

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