好了.. 經過各位板友的指點+參考了一些網站的sample
我砍掉重練了一個新的版本
改掉improve my English..一些詞語 還有一些怪異的文法
麻煩大家再幫我看下了..如果有什麼更好的寫法,也請再告訴我了
感謝各位m(_ _)m
MY NAME
1F., No.15, Xxx Rd., Xxx Dist.,
Taipei City, Taiwan
886-0000-000-000
March 22, 2013
Ms. Lily Lee
Personnel Manager
XXX Corporation
Dear Ms. Lee,
I was very excited to see your vacancy for a web developer position which was
advertised on the job123 website.
Having several years experience in the industry. I love building website, and
I hope it is popular with everyone. This is a perfect career which bring
me enthusiasm and satisfaction. I am finding a web development and overseas
job which can broaden my horizons and utilising my experience, knowledge and
skills to benefit a company. My related experience as follows.
* Knowledge of PHP OOP Programming, MVC Framework and MySQL.
* Coding using front-end technologies, such as HTML, CSS, JavaScript, jQuery.
* Familiar with NetBeans, Enterprise Architect, UML, SVN, XAMPP etc.
* Welcome new challenges and learning new skills.
I invite you to review my works of site
(http://xxx.xxx.com) . It will show you that I am a capable and professional
individual.
As you can see from my enclosed resume both of Chinese and English for your
reference. Thank you for your time and consideration, I am looking forward to
hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
MY NAME
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我砍掉重練了一個新的版本
改掉improve my English..一些詞語 還有一些怪異的文法
麻煩大家再幫我看下了..如果有什麼更好的寫法,也請再告訴我了
感謝各位m(_ _)m
MY NAME
1F., No.15, Xxx Rd., Xxx Dist.,
Taipei City, Taiwan
886-0000-000-000
March 22, 2013
Ms. Lily Lee
Personnel Manager
XXX Corporation
Dear Ms. Lee,
I was very excited to see your vacancy for a web developer position which was
advertised on the job123 website.
Having several years experience in the industry. I love building website, and
I hope it is popular with everyone. This is a perfect career which bring
me enthusiasm and satisfaction. I am finding a web development and overseas
job which can broaden my horizons and utilising my experience, knowledge and
skills to benefit a company. My related experience as follows.
* Knowledge of PHP OOP Programming, MVC Framework and MySQL.
* Coding using front-end technologies, such as HTML, CSS, JavaScript, jQuery.
* Familiar with NetBeans, Enterprise Architect, UML, SVN, XAMPP etc.
* Welcome new challenges and learning new skills.
I invite you to review my works of site
(http://xxx.xxx.com) . It will show you that I am a capable and professional
individual.
As you can see from my enclosed resume both of Chinese and English for your
reference. Thank you for your time and consideration, I am looking forward to
hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
MY NAME
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