英文書信問題 - 國貿工作討論

※ 引述《habiba (Amen)》之銘言：
: 請教一下版上大大一些問題
: 以下是我要翻譯的郵件:
: 麻煩指點哪裡需修改:
: 1.長期以來,敝公司的獲利全部卡在貴公司的貸款上
: For many years, our company's profits have been hit或affected by your
: outstanding debts.

Your loan payment squeeze our margin and surely cause impact on prospect
developement for a long time.


: 2.過去敝公司每年有盈餘,資金也可以應付
: In the past, with the earnings and sufficient funds, we were able to handls
: our accounts.

In the past, profits and circulated funds can let us manage this situation
at ease.


: 3.但由於去年敝司虧損,貴公司又欠款高達300萬美金
: 若貴公司再不還款的話
: ,敝司將很難面對廠商的種種預付款要求了
: However,we were in deficits last year and the amount of your outstanding debts
: is US$3,000,000
: If you still couldn't settling your accounts,
: we couldn't consent to your further prepayment request from us.


However,last-year profit loss and your loan payment hitting $3 millions dollars put us into daster at this moment.

If you cannot take care of the payment as soons as possible,

we will have a issue with vendors' request for pre-payment.



: 謝謝建議~

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