在科技產業如何用英文報告複雜的問題 - 工程師

Joe avatar
By Joe
at 2023-01-05T16:59

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大家好~~
我是Cathy,我以前當過台積電的研發工程師跟新創公司產品經理,
我很喜歡英文所以現在在教英文&創作英文教學內容,
我想分享之前一個工程師學生遇到的職場英文溝通問題:他問我要怎麼用英文報告工作上
比較複雜、難以用一句話講清楚的狀況
我提供了一個 "模仿架構+套用對應模板" 的學習方式,並舉出實際應用例子給大家,分
享如下,希望對你有些幫助囉!

https://i.imgur.com/BqJ5C0M.jpg
↑點這裡看本篇文章圖卡重點整理

#這個架構就是:
1.Here is the scenario → 先講發生狀況
2.Here is what I expect to see → 接著講期待看到的理想狀況
3.Here is what I see → 然後講實際上遇到的問題是甚麼
4.What I’ve done → 最後講針對這個狀況到目前為止做了甚麼事

#因應這個架構我們可以有對應的模板句型:
1.先講發生狀況:
We have 某個人/某單位 reporting an issue.
我們遇到某個人/某單位回報一個問題

2.接著講期待看到的理想狀況:
They expected to _____;
他們期待___ ;

3.然後講實際上遇到的問題是甚麼:
however, ____.
但是(實際上遇到問題是) ___

4.最後講針對這個狀況到目前為止我做了甚麼:
I’ve checked ___, and I’ve confirmed that ___
我已經檢查 ___ 並且我已經確認 ___

#把剛剛教的句子應用到真實工作場景裡喔!
假設今天我是個工程師,我想報告一個狀況是:
產品部門跟我說他們遇到一個問題是,如果在系統裡先按A按鈕再按B按鈕,系統會當掉,
沒辦法跳到想看的頁面,而針對這個狀況我目前已經做的是我有檢查基本設定都沒有出錯

所以用剛剛的模板句型可以組織出以下這段報告喔:

☆先講發生狀況:
We have the product team reporting an issue.
我們遇到產品部門回報一個問題

☆接著講對方期待看到的理想狀況:
They expected to see XX page after hitting B button;
他們期待按B按鈕後看到XX頁面

☆然後講實際上遇到的問題是甚麼:
however, the system crashes if they hit B button right after they hit A
button.
但是(實際上狀況是) 如果先按A按鈕接著按B系統會當掉

☆最後講針對這個狀況到目前為止我做了甚麼:
I’ve checked the default settings, and I’ve confirmed that they submitted
the correct settings last Friday.
我已經檢查基本設定,並且我已經確認了他們上週五有上傳正確的基本設定

報告完畢!

《最後也歡迎你》
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(訂閱完記得去信箱二次確認才會訂閱成功唷)

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All Comments

Christine avatar
By Christine
at 2023-01-07T18:06
這版只推Dear sir
Zenobia avatar
By Zenobia
at 2023-01-09T19:14
你待過台積 你應該知道RD的報告有多爛啊
Blanche avatar
By Blanche
at 2023-01-07T21:14
台積研發?
Jake avatar
By Jake
at 2023-01-09T22:21
我只覺得奇怪老闆常常寄送Mail ,收信人與loop 內
都是台灣人.偏偏要用英文寫?
Carolina Franco avatar
By Carolina Franco
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這不重要,讓客戶知道越少越好
Isabella avatar
By Isabella
at 2023-01-09T22:21
認真的嗎?複雜的問題最佳解就是轉給別人解
Michael avatar
By Michael
at 2023-01-07T21:14
FYI就可以了
Candice avatar
By Candice
at 2023-01-09T22:21
例子講了一堆廢話,然後結論還不知道解決問題了嗎,
建議換個例子
Kumar avatar
By Kumar
at 2023-01-07T21:14
例子也沒有用root cause 分析法回答,根本不適合台
積文化
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-09T22:21
最重要的原因勒,還有怎麼推給其他部門的方式哩
Skylar DavisLinda avatar
By Skylar DavisLinda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
dear sir, pls help check一招用十年
Carolina Franco avatar
By Carolina Franco
at 2023-01-09T22:21
遇到這種問題,敝司同仁皆採用FYI把燙手山芋丟給他
人大法
Mason avatar
By Mason
at 2023-01-07T21:14
cathy你為什麼離開GG護國神山 有見過黃蝕公園嘛?
Rosalind avatar
By Rosalind
at 2023-01-09T22:21
認真疑問 這種程度是誰需要?
Ingrid avatar
By Ingrid
at 2023-01-07T21:14
FYR 廣告文還是業配文? 例子裡沒有提highlight~失敗
Wallis avatar
By Wallis
at 2023-01-09T22:21
成人大衛英語也要為護國神山服務請洽人事採購
Harry avatar
By Harry
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這適合一般人啦,但推文出現一群台積英文XDD
Callum avatar
By Callum
at 2023-01-09T22:21
現在各行各業都要掛個從台積電出來的抬頭嗎
Hardy avatar
By Hardy
at 2023-01-07T21:14
台積精華就是寄信叫人回答 然後烤雞還是最頂的
Elvira avatar
By Elvira
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear Sir ......... FYI
Susan avatar
By Susan
at 2023-01-07T21:14
GG英文毫不重要啊,考績最頂的信件不超過三行
Eartha avatar
By Eartha
at 2023-01-09T22:21
整理重點?你的錯我幹嘛整理重點?你整理啊
Damian avatar
By Damian
at 2023-01-07T21:14
台積校友是不是分佈各行各業
Frederica avatar
By Frederica
at 2023-01-09T22:21
有用心推一下啦QQ
Una avatar
By Una
at 2023-01-07T21:14
一堆贅字…
Mary avatar
By Mary
at 2023-01-09T22:21
台積內英文太好別人會看不懂,裡面喜歡台式英文
但還是給推,這是台積的問題不是原po的
Edwina avatar
By Edwina
at 2023-01-07T21:14
我台積出來的,有看有推
Charlie avatar
By Charlie
at 2023-01-09T22:21
有一般科技業設計RD的英文嗎?不錯的教材
Dinah avatar
By Dinah
at 2023-01-07T21:14
FYI
Quanna avatar
By Quanna
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear sir
Rebecca avatar
By Rebecca
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear sir
Charlotte avatar
By Charlotte
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear sir, pls help, fyi
Zenobia avatar
By Zenobia
at 2023-01-07T21:14
dear sir pls help
Lauren avatar
By Lauren
at 2023-01-09T22:21
many thanks
Candice avatar
By Candice
at 2023-01-07T21:14
傻眼
Kristin avatar
By Kristin
at 2023-01-09T22:21
James avatar
By James
at 2023-01-07T21:14
講這麼多是要給誰看?你的上頭只會回你get it done
,能解決問題的人也懶得管你的文法、寫的落落長反而
模糊了焦點
Eden avatar
By Eden
at 2023-01-09T22:21
但還是要用心推~
Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear All:FAI~
FYI
Frederica avatar
By Frederica
at 2023-01-09T22:21
拿出GG RD 沒有增加親切感反而被酸爆,笑死
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear sir
Bethany avatar
By Bethany
at 2023-01-09T22:21
這文章架構開頭就讓人歪樓了
Carol avatar
By Carol
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這邊酸民太多
Frederica avatar
By Frederica
at 2023-01-09T22:21
雖然實際上講太多了,但推一個願意分享幫忙
Andrew avatar
By Andrew
at 2023-01-07T21:14
註定只能當小兵的一篇
Valerie avatar
By Valerie
at 2023-01-09T22:21
當官的就 FYI
William avatar
By William
at 2023-01-07T21:14
原PO別太在意,越多人提出怪怪的建議,廣告效果只會
更好
Doris avatar
By Doris
at 2023-01-09T22:21
hi sir, plz check this issue
Bennie avatar
By Bennie
at 2023-01-07T21:14
我只會 yes sir , okay sir , i'll check later, si
r
Ula avatar
By Ula
at 2023-01-09T22:21
老闆和客戶其實只在意你什麼時候能搞定 所以不用解
釋那麼多 他們不想聽好嗎
Skylar Davis avatar
By Skylar Davis
at 2023-01-07T21:14
不對哦,第一頁就要先給結論了。否則,沒人看
Jake avatar
By Jake
at 2023-01-09T22:21
這個課程大概只有不用在現場處理狀況的主管會需要
但其實這些主管自有應付他們上級的方法 不用落落長
的報告
Linda avatar
By Linda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
I don’t know , don’t ask me
Catherine avatar
By Catherine
at 2023-01-09T22:21
bug report我是很希望大家都這樣寫,不過通常是重現
xxx is broken然後要回他please define broken...
Zanna avatar
By Zanna
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear Sir
Tracy avatar
By Tracy
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear sir plz help check this lot FYI
Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2023-01-07T21:14
商業信沒在寫冗長句...除非技術討論
Iris avatar
By Iris
at 2023-01-09T22:21
同學推!不過科技業需要的英文感覺是一樣使用26個字
母的另一種語言XD
Ida avatar
By Ida
at 2023-01-07T21:14
最常見是 你寫一堆 老外回你 我知道了 結束 不然就
是說 看不懂
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Attached you can see
Una avatar
By Una
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear Sir, pls E/G xxxxx for WB common tool.
Emily avatar
By Emily
at 2023-01-09T22:21
台大化工系史丹佛化工研究所教成人英文
可以去唸師大英語系劍橋成人英語教學證書
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-07T21:14
劉毅英文換你來開
Poppy avatar
By Poppy
at 2023-01-09T22:21
推分享!
Lucy avatar
By Lucy
at 2023-01-07T21:14
努力學英文給美國人抄 領的未必比較多
Donna avatar
By Donna
at 2023-01-09T22:21
i don't give it a fuck.
Sandy avatar
By Sandy
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear all,
FBI
Many many thanks
Olga avatar
By Olga
at 2023-01-09T22:21
就跟講中文一樣啊 這有什麼好討論的
Kumar avatar
By Kumar
at 2023-01-07T21:14
身在外商要寄信給美國,我覺得這篇很實用啊
Rae avatar
By Rae
at 2023-01-09T22:21
You can you up
Freda avatar
By Freda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear Sir, … , plz help, … , FYI 醬就夠了
Damian avatar
By Damian
at 2023-01-09T22:21
loop xxx
Isla avatar
By Isla
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這篇最後怎麼沒有Best regards?? 我看你完全不行喔
Ingrid avatar
By Ingrid
at 2023-01-09T22:21
台積RD的報告不是把vendor做的東西整碗捧去嗎
David avatar
By David
at 2023-01-07T21:14
還可以 但最後兩句太冗長
Kristin avatar
By Kristin
at 2023-01-09T22:21
我打過類似的信給加拿大裔的老闆 他寫一長串的英文
回我「所以勒?不要給我延期喔」
Queena avatar
By Queena
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Hi sir. Please help
William avatar
By William
at 2023-01-09T22:21
只能說不管哪種語言 老闆就是那德行
Kama avatar
By Kama
at 2023-01-07T21:14
實際上根本沒這樣用 簡潔明白最好
Charlie avatar
By Charlie
at 2023-01-09T22:21
一張圖能夠屌打你說一大串
Genevieve avatar
By Genevieve
at 2023-01-07T21:14
批發課程內容給hahow好學校賣給台積電HR
Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2023-01-09T22:21
先推
Catherine avatar
By Catherine
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear sir , Thanks for your support always
Lauren avatar
By Lauren
at 2023-01-09T22:21
...還拿gg業
Yuri avatar
By Yuri
at 2023-01-07T21:14
一樓笑死
Rae avatar
By Rae
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear sir, please help, best regards,
Tracy avatar
By Tracy
at 2023-01-07T21:14
有夠爛 這種報法先被老闆幹死
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-09T22:21
dear sir 最好用
Ophelia avatar
By Ophelia
at 2023-01-07T21:14
dear 射 ya 射
Cara avatar
By Cara
at 2023-01-09T22:21
推本人,喜歡你的教學
Selena avatar
By Selena
at 2023-01-07T21:14
FYI
Megan avatar
By Megan
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Deer sir, beast retards
Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2023-01-07T21:14
beastXD
Barb Cronin avatar
By Barb Cronin
at 2023-01-09T22:21
覺得用8D report 比較簡單
Kyle avatar
By Kyle
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear sir fyr plz help
Charlie avatar
By Charlie
at 2023-01-09T22:21
噓Dear sir....誰要跟你dear
Harry avatar
By Harry
at 2023-01-07T21:14
hi sir 可以嗎
Callum avatar
By Callum
at 2023-01-09T22:21
跟台積沒關那幹嘛要開頭就把積積搬出來
Ophelia avatar
By Ophelia
at 2023-01-07T21:14
呃 這完全不重要
Enid avatar
By Enid
at 2023-01-09T22:21
dear sir,pls check thx…,
Rosalind avatar
By Rosalind
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Dear sir,
Poppy avatar
By Poppy
at 2023-01-09T22:21
在美國讀書 認同推
Mary avatar
By Mary
at 2023-01-07T21:14
我都寫 My dear,
Margaret avatar
By Margaret
at 2023-01-09T22:21
原po資歷蠻猛的….
John avatar
By John
at 2023-01-07T21:14
給推,謝分享
Irma avatar
By Irma
at 2023-01-09T22:21
很棒 謝謝分享
Skylar DavisLinda avatar
By Skylar DavisLinda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
用流利外文描述垃圾,垃圾也不會變黃金阿 XD
Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2023-01-09T22:21
拿掉所有的贅字動詞助詞 字越少越好
Emma avatar
By Emma
at 2023-01-07T21:14
推圖卡 非常直觀容易記住
Queena avatar
By Queena
at 2023-01-09T22:21
dear Sir
Skylar DavisLinda avatar
By Skylar DavisLinda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Many thanks, Dear Sir
Caitlin avatar
By Caitlin
at 2023-01-09T22:21
職場學英文最好的方法就是把神人的信好好保存,輪
到自己要報告的時候就拿出來抄
Elizabeth avatar
By Elizabeth
at 2023-01-07T21:14
報告就報problem,situation,action,result這樣就
好 不用這麼多
Christine avatar
By Christine
at 2023-01-09T22:21
不就中文想講什麼只是用英文而已嗎?
Charlotte avatar
By Charlotte
at 2023-01-07T21:14
看來她沒寫過report
Iris avatar
By Iris
at 2023-01-09T22:21
上頭只會講urgent
Eartha avatar
By Eartha
at 2023-01-07T21:14
很像我比較慘,要寫DMAIC report
Una avatar
By Una
at 2023-01-09T22:21
我外國老闆說看到這樣寫,他會抓狂
Daniel avatar
By Daniel
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這板只會 dear sir 其他都太難了
Lydia avatar
By Lydia
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear Sirs, pls help. tks.
Edwina avatar
By Edwina
at 2023-01-07T21:14
軟體工程師:please help check hardware issue,
硬體工程師:please help check software issue,
一整年就過了
James avatar
By James
at 2023-01-09T22:21
這不就翻譯而已,而且很不簡潔
Frederica avatar
By Frederica
at 2023-01-07T21:14
怎麼會有人英文寫作這麼差還跑出來教學?
Iris avatar
By Iris
at 2023-01-09T22:21
英文爛真的不要收錢還誤人子弟好嗎?
Valerie avatar
By Valerie
at 2023-01-07T21:14
寫這種信保證被笑死,還以為是什麼小學生寫的
Damian avatar
By Damian
at 2023-01-09T22:21
多看一些職場英文不錯啊,參加外國廠商的稽核會議,
可以好好表現
Susan avatar
By Susan
at 2023-01-07T21:14
嘻嘻
Belly avatar
By Belly
at 2023-01-09T22:21
業界不吃這套
Puput avatar
By Puput
at 2023-01-07T21:14
很爛 根本不符合實際狀況 中學生才會被騙
Anthony avatar
By Anthony
at 2023-01-09T22:21
英文不好就認命寫這樣的句子
英文好可以一兩句搞定
Ida avatar
By Ida
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這設備在用的吧
Bennie avatar
By Bennie
at 2023-01-09T22:21
也沒說為何按A再按B會當機,怎麼知道週五上傳的是對
的還是錯的設定。
Zanna avatar
By Zanna
at 2023-01-07T21:14
那些老頭叫人家用英文 原因就是中文不會打 也打不
Rachel avatar
By Rachel
at 2023-01-09T22:21
不用理他們 這裡一堆不是科技業的處男宅
Caitlin avatar
By Caitlin
at 2023-01-07T21:14
感謝
Caitlin avatar
By Caitlin
at 2023-01-09T22:21
這模板很泛用 con call尤其
Anthony avatar
By Anthony
at 2023-01-07T21:14
看公司,有些公司結論導向,你應該把結論放在開頭。
Jacky avatar
By Jacky
at 2023-01-09T22:21
實用推~
Suhail Hany avatar
By Suhail Hany
at 2023-01-07T21:14
台積的英文滿好笑的
James avatar
By James
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Sincerely yours
Olivia avatar
By Olivia
at 2023-01-07T21:14
就因為一開始寫GG 後面就全部歪樓Dear sir了
Christine avatar
By Christine
at 2023-01-09T22:21
結論先寫,老外沒那麼多時間聽廢話
有疑問才會看你的過程,不然就是下一個
Hamiltion avatar
By Hamiltion
at 2023-01-07T21:14
附圖會比較多人參加喔
Olga avatar
By Olga
at 2023-01-09T22:21
滿台的
Gilbert avatar
By Gilbert
at 2023-01-07T21:14
B/R
Aaliyah avatar
By Aaliyah
at 2023-01-09T22:21
cathy madam
Freda avatar
By Freda
at 2023-01-07T21:14
推~從改名前就有在發摟了的粉專~
Lydia avatar
By Lydia
at 2023-01-09T22:21
有分享很棒啊
Jacob avatar
By Jacob
at 2023-01-07T21:14
辦公email看到Dear真的會嘆氣...XD
Damian avatar
By Damian
at 2023-01-09T22:21
推 我英文很爛 加減學
Barb Cronin avatar
By Barb Cronin
at 2023-01-07T21:14
可憐呀,到底多少人英文爛到需要被這種教
Sandy avatar
By Sandy
at 2023-01-09T22:21
pls kindly help to check
Mary avatar
By Mary
at 2023-01-07T21:14
什麼東西?
Ophelia avatar
By Ophelia
at 2023-01-09T22:21
can I speak in Chinese?好的,謝謝。
Rachel avatar
By Rachel
at 2023-01-07T21:14
放張圖片別人會比較注意這封信
Daniel avatar
By Daniel
at 2023-01-09T22:21
不錯啊
Joe avatar
By Joe
at 2023-01-07T21:14
GG待三個月也可以說自己是GG出來的啊
John avatar
By John
at 2023-01-09T22:21
凱茜 棒棒
Madame avatar
By Madame
at 2023-01-07T21:14
滿滿台式英文
Todd Johnson avatar
By Todd Johnson
at 2023-01-09T22:21
Dear sir ,best regards
Lydia avatar
By Lydia
at 2023-01-07T21:14
一樣在GG為什麼每週都在跟北美客戶開會,無法跟推
文一樣只會Dear sir 跟please help就好,只能羨慕
Eden avatar
By Eden
at 2023-01-09T22:21
這篇到底認真還反串?
Candice avatar
By Candice
at 2023-01-07T21:14
幫補血
Elizabeth avatar
By Elizabeth
at 2023-01-09T22:21
感謝參考 我還是覺得8D好用
Joseph avatar
By Joseph
at 2023-01-07T21:14
這什麼英文…..
Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2023-01-09T22:21
笑死 pls check
Todd Johnson avatar
By Todd Johnson
at 2023-01-07T21:14
1.Ok check ooxx ok
2.Save log data
3.reboot w/s
4.return to oo
Jack avatar
By Jack
at 2023-01-09T22:21
time out pls check ok! Check reboot
Agatha avatar
By Agatha
at 2023-01-07T21:14
Look check

高通聯發科考量台積電 3 奈米成本高,202

Oscar avatar
By Oscar
at 2023-01-05T16:45
純好奇想討論一個問題: 先進製程的軍備競賽會不會有一個終點? 在GPU, 高階手機等終端產品看來 消費者對於極致效能的追求應該有一個盡頭 會不會連帶影響晶片設計商開發新產品的進程 ex: 消費者不買新旗艦+新製程越來越貴-andgt;手機廠砍單-andgt;IC廠砍單-andgt;台積訂單減少-a ...

現在是不是該抄底美光了?

Ivy avatar
By Ivy
at 2023-01-05T14:34
當天抄底,現在漲十趴了 https://i.imgur.com/NoFw6h3.jpg 現在亞馬遜也要裁員 是不是又該抄底了? 亞馬遜這題應該送分題吧? 引述《yamakazi (大安吳彥祖)》之銘言: : 股價一年來新低 : 又要裁員 : 按照規律裁員後幾乎股價都會漲 : 這應該是進場訊號了吧 : ...

高通聯發科考量台積電 3 奈米成本高,202

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By Skylar DavisLinda
at 2023-01-05T14:03
新聞標題: 高通聯發科考量台積電 3 奈米成本高,2023 年可能只蘋果一家採用 根據外媒 MacRumors 的報導,在ic設計大廠高通 (Qualcomm) 和聯發科 (Mediatek) 尚 未確定是否會在 2023 年推出採用台積電 3 奈米製程晶片的情況下,蘋果可能是2023年 唯一一家採 ...

直接教還是讓下屬試錯?

Ina avatar
By Ina
at 2023-01-05T13:54
假設同樣問題~ 第一次直接教,學會了就不會再來問一樣問題~讚! 第二次又問,可能我上次沒教好,再教一次。 第三次再問,我再也不教了。。。 ----- Sent from JPTT on my Samsung SM-A528B. - ...

大家被主管或前輩講過最難聽的話?

Hedwig avatar
By Hedwig
at 2023-01-05T13:43
我有個朋友31歲才找到第一份工作 但待遇不錯月薪9萬 結果有個嘴巴很臭的長輩就酸說畢業總是得找份工作 然後他就崩潰了 - ...