their security of place with others - 翻譯

In brief, Social types focus on interacting with people in ways that will
build their personal value, their sense of accomplishment, and their security
of place with others.

簡單的說，社交類型的人把焦點集中在藉著和人群來往的方式來建立自己的個人價值、
成就感和 與人群同處一室的安全感。

their security of place with others
實在不太會翻
請問一下
翻成與人群同處一室的安全感 有沒有問題呢?

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