滔滔不絕 - 翻譯
By Madame
at 2010-05-09T04:53
at 2010-05-09T04:53
Table of Contents
Stephen King 的某小說譯本。譯者是北部名大外文系，另一北部名大譯研所畢業。
「牧師也閉上了原本滔滔不絕的嘴巴」
眼前浮現個景象：數不清的嘴巴像白浪一般滔滔奔過
滔滔不絕的言論、講道……
建議：滔滔不絕改成川流不息（誤）
沒有原文，不過「講不停」如何？應（硬）用成語有時太沈重了些。
「那裡大概有三打的人停下來看戲」
恩，笨蛋確實該以「打」計，但是台灣包裝蛋都以10個為單位，以前還可以一個個買……
就算如此，沒必要用三打「的人」──三打人就OK了吧？
12*3=36~40
建議：那裡有三四十個人停下來看戲
還真的覺得國文系畢業的譯者譯文要可看得多。
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「牧師也閉上了原本滔滔不絕的嘴巴」
眼前浮現個景象：數不清的嘴巴像白浪一般滔滔奔過
滔滔不絕的言論、講道……
建議：滔滔不絕改成川流不息（誤）
沒有原文，不過「講不停」如何？應（硬）用成語有時太沈重了些。
「那裡大概有三打的人停下來看戲」
恩，笨蛋確實該以「打」計，但是台灣包裝蛋都以10個為單位，以前還可以一個個買……
就算如此，沒必要用三打「的人」──三打人就OK了吧？
12*3=36~40
建議：那裡有三四十個人停下來看戲
還真的覺得國文系畢業的譯者譯文要可看得多。
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