一句翻譯請教 - 翻譯

How much of a role does aggressive internal competition play in who
succeeds and who fails in this culture?

我翻成：
激烈的內部競爭如何在組織中勝者與敗者之中取得平衡？

這樣翻對嗎？（其實我有點不懂這句的意思...）

謝謝

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