可以幫我看哪裡怪怪的嗎? - 翻譯

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簡單的色調 行走於自然主義 低調的奢華 生活簡單卻也精采 似花一般 靜靜的  綻放
simple tone, walk along naturalism , understated luxury, live is simply also actually brilliant, as flowers effloresce still



我的設計理念

可以幫我修一下嗎?
3Q

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All Comments

Ursula avatarUrsula2007-11-17
simple colour tone that goes along with the essence
Iris avatarIris2007-11-19
of naturalism. embedded luxury. lives simply, but
Ethan avatarEthan2007-11-22
also brilliantly. blossomed peacefully like flowers.
Jack avatarJack2007-11-25
標點符號怪怪的~
Delia avatarDelia2007-11-27
寫中文很容易沒有主詞 流於鋪陳敘述 要翻就會變了味道