大大們可以幫我訂正一下嗎?感謝 - 翻譯

原文:
In Oruro Department the weather is so cold. We have already came back to
school. We had a break of three weeks. During that time I was playing soccer
and I shared with my family.
我的翻譯:
現在Oruro省的天氣滿冷的。而我們已經回到學校了。我們之前已經休息三個禮拜了。
在那段放假的期間，我和我的家人常一起踢足球。

**小的想請教的是我的時態有搞錯嗎? 因為我覺得有些怪怪的，我是新手才剛翻譯沒多久
還請大大們多多指教

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