排列 - 翻譯

我認為公務員應隨社會環境變遷，隨時充實專業知識與學習他國寶貴經驗，以提升管理品
質。

請問這一句的順序應如何排列呢??


I believe that public servants should constantly update their professional
knowledge and learn from experiences abroad, as environments change, in
order to improve the quality of management.

or

I believe that as environments change, public servants should constantly update
their professional knowledge and learn from experiences abroad, in order to
improve the quality of management.

還是有更好的順序呢?

多謝指教!!!

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