請幫忙看一下我的翻譯..:) - 翻譯

我有跑去應徵前面的那個巫毒娃娃的試譯啦..
不過當然沒上..
不過我想請大家幫我看一下我的翻譯..
畢竟..學習會犯錯..犯錯會進步..(不過還是很害羞的啦..)

When we are talking about Voodoo dolls, we have to start from
“Voodoo”. Voodoo is an ancient religion originating in Africa.
In Voodoo, people cast magic spells via a medium- a Voodoo doll.
Original Voodoo dolls are made of animal bones or straw.
Their appearances are usually sinister and abominable. Moreover,
Voodoo practice and ritual are mysterious and strange.
That’s why many people believe Voodoo is an evil religion,
and Voodoo dolls are seemed as the representative of Voodoo
evil curses.
However, Voodoo also has lots of positive spells, such as
protection spells, healing spells, love spells, etc. For
changing people’s stereotype of Voodoo dolls,
Ethnic Voodoo Group delicately crafts a series of Subject Voodoo
Dolls with various names and meanings to create novel,
cute, and positive Voodoo dolls.


說到巫毒娃娃，就要從Voodoo巫毒這個宗教來說了，巫毒教源起於非洲，該宗教施法時需
要透過一種媒介，也就是巫毒人偶。原始的巫毒人偶造型均是由獸骨或是稻草編織而成，
各個面目猙獰，加上其宗教儀式神秘詭譎，故大多數的人都認為巫毒教是個邪教，而巫毒
法術及巫毒人偶更被視為邪惡詛咒的代表。

然而，巫毒術中還有許多關於守護、治療、戀愛等等積極正面的法術卻因此被忽略了，因
此，艾思尼克設計團隊便運用精巧的手工發展出一系列含意及名稱各異的主題巫毒娃娃，
轉化巫毒人偶帶給人們的錯誤的印象，建立新奇可愛涵義正面光明的巫毒娃娃！

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