路透社報導 - 翻譯

※ 引述《Duarte (分手不能症候群)》之銘言：
: A new virus has killed up to 149 people in Mexico and the World
: Health Organisation moved closer on Monday to declaring it the
: world's first flu pandemic since 1968 as the illness spread
: further in the United States and Europe.
: Reuters reports
: 一種新病毒已造成墨西哥共一百四十九人死亡。因為疫情向美國與歐洲更
: 進一步蔓延，促使世界衛生組織更有可能正式宣布自一九六八年來第一次
: 全世界流行性感冒大流行的消息。
: 路透社報導


我有點小建議給原PO
看了兩次你翻譯的路透社新聞
我覺得你要練習把長句拆短
不是光用逗號來分而已

在墨西哥，已經有149人因某種新病毒送命，由於歐美疫情擴散（這裡你譯錯了，spread
further IN the U.S. and Europe, not TO)，世界衛生組織週一宣佈1968年來首次的流
感大流行。

謝謝提醒，我的確沒注意到moved closer這兩字。補充原文第二段並修改譯文如下：

A new virus has killed up to 149 people in Mexico and the World Health
Organization moved closer on Monday to declaring it the first flu pandemic
in 40 years as more people were infected in the United States and Europe.
The WHO raised its pandemic alert level for the swine flu virus to phase 4,
indicating a significantly increased risk of a pandemic, a global outbreak
of a serious disease.

在墨西哥，已經有149人因一種新病毒送命。由於歐美患者增加，世界衛生組織週一調高
豬流感警戒層級至第四級，更逼近瘟疫警戒線。自1968年（或四十年來）世衛尚未宣佈
過全球流感大流行。

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