可以麻煩幫我看一下我的中翻英嗎? 感謝:) - 翻譯

拙者之見

※ 引述《renaiss (我的愛經得起流動比率的)》之銘言：
: 以下是我翻的句子, 但是有一些我覺得翻的怪怪的
: 所以上來跟各位前輩討教討教:)
: 這是一篇中翻英的內容.
: 中文:
: 當台灣越來越走向民主時代後，領袖必須以民意為依歸，還需要眾多的幕僚與智曩替他蒐
: 集情報，提出建言，作為決策的參考。因此有人將民主時代的領袖特質定義為：最會跟
: 著群眾走的人。在如今多元而動態的社會中，很多不同的價值觀交錯混合，那一種形象會
: 吸引多少選民？有多少效果？實在難以預測。而民主時代，領袖個人的特質固然吸引人，
: 但這些特質和日後的「施政方針」卻不見得有什麼必然的關連。
: 我的翻譯:
As Taiwan ... to demo...放句首 ,
: Not only should Taiwan leader take public opinions into account but also he
x xx s must act in accordance to p o ^they x
應該 不是 必需 (性別歧視宜免)
: needs to have many staff assistants and masterminds collect information and
x x x x to
: bring up opinions with reference to policy decision when Taiwan is pursuing
recommendments to provide ref... for policy decisions.
: its own roadmap to democracy.
: Therefore, someone defines leadership in democratic age as the one who takes
"the one that walks best with the mass"
: the road as the public do. In such a diverse and dynamitic society,
dynamic (你寫成炸藥)
: with a mixture of different values, it is hard to predict that which image will
how many
voters shall a particular image attract and how much are its' effects
: draw attention from the electorate and to certain degree the effect it has.
: However, in a democratic period, leadership might be
era/age,personal characteristics of the leader indeed
seems attractive (to the people),
: attractive but this trait might have nothing to do with the policy direction.
: 不知道這樣翻通不通順 但是 有些點翻起來確實吃力
: 譬如說, 那一種形象會吸引多少選民？有多少效果？/ 最會跟著群眾走的人。
: 之類的句子, 我想只能盡量做到達意了吧.
: 總之 請指教囉:)
: 感謝.

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