英文-請問這句應該怎麼翻譯比較妥當 - 翻譯

He was an original company member and Dance Captain for Bring in 'Da Noise,
Bring in 'Da Funk at both The Joseph Papp Public Theater/New York Shakespeare
Festival and on Broadway.

他曾是一家公司的創始員工，而且也是The Joseph Papp Public Theater
(紐約莎士比亞藝術節)和百老匯的首席舞者。

請問這樣翻可以嗎？

我覺得翻的怪怪的。

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