"藝術家們必須..." - 翻譯

※ 引述《hw2008 (五嶽倒為輕)》之銘言：
: 大家好，蔣勳老師寫說過這樣一句話：

: 藝術家們必須從技術的部份提升到「美」的層次，如果沒有做到，通常就被認為是「匠」
: 。什麼是匠？就是擁有技術的人被技術綁住了，無法真正超越，達到心靈的境界。

Artists must elevate themselves from skills and techniques to the level of art
and beauty. Without doing so, they will be seen as being merely
"craftspersons." A craftsperson is skillful, yet this person is also bound by
his or her skills and techniques and unable to excel beyond oneself to touch
the realm of soul.


: 我很喜歡這句話
: 很想分享給我的外國朋友，可是總覺得自己用英文翻得不夠漂亮
: 這是我自己的翻譯：
: Artists must manage to lift up their techniques to the field of beauty. If
: they failed, they would often be referred to as "craftsmen," who are limited
: by the their techniques and cannot reach the beauty of mind.
: 其中的層次、境界，我覺得自己好像沒有翻出來
: 而「匠」這個字，在這裡我用craftsman，不曉得有沒有傳達到原文想表達的意思？
: 希望眾板友能指點我一下，或者提供其他更好的寫法，感激不盡！

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