請教與建築有關的翻譯 - 翻譯

By Olive
at 2008-01-05T02:06

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原文:
木構建築的柱,樑,枋等若少了裝飾,在空間的運作上彷若少了些許生氣

翻譯:
If there is no decoration on the columns, beams and purlins of the wooden
building, the space seemss to lack of vitality.

以上是自己所翻的,但總覺得翻的不好
能否請各位先進幫忙修改
或是提供更好的翻譯
謝謝^^

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All Comments

By Enid
at 2008-01-06T04:39

文法問題是to be lack of吧....

By Caroline
at 2008-01-09T06:16

把If there is no改成Without 我會這樣翻

請問"sure of my line"怎麼翻譯才恰當?

By Elvira
at 2008-01-04T11:19

※ 引述《polarcircle (66.5)》之銘言： : Finally knowing the one that I wanted was yours : Making my entrance again with my usual flair : 用我平日的本領翩然登場 : Sure of my lines ...